Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update in Korean #35

zer0big · 2018-09-11T01:40:54Z

커밋/히스토리 정제하여 다시 요청드립니다.
tutorial-kubernetes-basics-update에 대한 한글 번역본 초안입니다.

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지난 리뷰와 같이 참고를 부탁드린 내용은 선택적으로 반영하시면 되겠습니다.

content/ko/docs/tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update/update-intro.html

gochist · 2018-09-12T13:39:25Z

content/ko/docs/tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update/update-intro.html

-                    In Kubernetes, updates are versioned and any Deployment update can be reverted to previous (stable)
-                    version.</p>
+                <p>이전 모듈에서 여러 개의 인스턴스를 동작시키도록 애플리케이션을 스케일 했다. 이것은 애플리케이션의 가용성에 영향을 미치지 않으면서
+                   업데이트를 수행하는 것에 대한 요구이다. 기본적으로, 업데이트가 이루어지는 동안 이용불가한 파드의 최대 갯수와 생성가능한 새로운 파드의 최대 갯수는 같다.


s/생성가능한/생성 가능한/

gochist · 2018-09-12T13:39:56Z

content/ko/docs/tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update/update-intro.html

-                    In Kubernetes, updates are versioned and any Deployment update can be reverted to previous (stable)
-                    version.</p>
+                <p>이전 모듈에서 여러 개의 인스턴스를 동작시키도록 애플리케이션을 스케일 했다. 이것은 애플리케이션의 가용성에 영향을 미치지 않으면서
+                   업데이트를 수행하는 것에 대한 요구이다. 기본적으로, 업데이트가 이루어지는 동안 이용불가한 파드의 최대 갯수와 생성가능한 새로운 파드의 최대 갯수는 같다.


s/이용불가한/이용 불가한/

gochist · 2018-09-12T13:59:33Z

content/ko/docs/tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update/update-intro.html

-                    version.</p>
+                <p>이전 모듈에서 여러 개의 인스턴스를 동작시키도록 애플리케이션을 스케일 했다. 이것은 애플리케이션의 가용성에 영향을 미치지 않으면서
+                   업데이트를 수행하는 것에 대한 요구이다. 기본적으로, 업데이트가 이루어지는 동안 이용불가한 파드의 최대 갯수와 생성가능한 새로운 파드의 최대 갯수는 같다.
+                   두 옵션은 (파드에 대한) 숫자 또는 백분율로 구성되어질 수 있다.


s/숫자/개수/

숫자도 괜찮지만, 파드의 개수로도 설정할 수 있다는 의미를 보다 명확히 전달하기 위함입니다. 파드의 숫자라고 표현하면 파드를 대표하는 속성으로 오해할 여지가 있습니다. 참고해주세요.

content/ko/docs/tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update/update-intro.html

zer0big · 2018-09-12T14:32:26Z

@gochist 리뷰 감사드립니다. 전체적으로 공감이 확확 됩니다. 업데이트 하도록 하겠습니다~

gochist

반영이 안된 내용이 있어 한 번 더 작업 요청드립니다.

gochist · 2018-09-13T14:18:23Z

content/ko/docs/tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update/update-intro.html

-                    Pods instances with new ones. The new Pods will be scheduled on Nodes with available resources.</p>
+                <p> 사용자들은 애플리케이션이 항상 가용한 상태일 것이라 여기고 개발자들은 하루에 여러번씩 새로운 버전을
+                    배포하도록 요구 받고있다. 쿠버네티스에서는 이것을 롤링 업데이트를 통해 이루고 있다. <b>롤링 업데이트</b>는 파드 인스턴스를 점진적으로 새로운 것으로 업데이트하여 디플로이먼트 업데이트가 서비스 중단 없이 이루어 질 수 있도록 해준다.
+                    새로운 파드는 가용한 자원을 보유한 노드로 스케줄 되어질 것이다.</p>


s/스케줄 되어질/스케줄될/

피동 표현의 중복 제거

gochist · 2018-09-13T14:20:27Z

content/ko/docs/tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update/update-intro.html

-                <p>Similar to application Scaling, if a Deployment is exposed publicly, the Service will load-balance
-                    the traffic only to available Pods during the update. An available Pod is an instance that is
-                    available to the users of the application.</p>
+                <p>애플리케이션 스케일링과 유사하게, 디플로이먼트가 외부로 노출되면, 서비스는 업데이트가 이루어 지는 동안 오직 가용한 파드에게만 트래픽을 로드밸런스 할 것이다. 가용한 파드란 애플리케이션의 사용자들에게 가용한 상태의 인스턴스를 말한다.</p>


s/이루어 지는/이루어지는/

"이루다"와 "(~어)지다"의 합성어로 붙여씁니다. 이하 일괄 적용 바랍니다.

gochist · 2018-09-13T14:21:28Z

content/ko/docs/tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update/update-intro.html


                </ul>

            </div>
            <div class="col-md-4">
                <div class="content__box content__box_fill">
-                    <p><i>If a Deployment is exposed publicly, the Service will load-balance the traffic only to
-                        available Pods during the update. </i></p>
+                    <p><i>디플로이먼트가 외부로 노출되면, 서비스는 업데이트가 이루어 지는 동안 오직 가용한 파드에게만 트래픽을 로드밸런스 할 것이다. </i></p>


s/이루어 지는/이루어지는/

"이루다"와 "(~어)지다"의 합성어로 붙여씁니다.

gochist · 2018-09-13T14:22:39Z

content/ko/docs/tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update/update-intro.html

-                    In Kubernetes, updates are versioned and any Deployment update can be reverted to previous (stable)
-                    version.</p>
+                <p>이전 모듈에서 여러 개의 인스턴스를 동작시키도록 애플리케이션을 스케일 했다. 이것은 애플리케이션의 가용성에 영향을 미치지 않으면서
+                   업데이트를 수행하는 것에 대한 요구이다. 기본적으로, 업데이트가 이루어지는 동안 이용 불가한 파드의 최대 개수와 생성 가능한 새로운 파드의 최대 개수는 같다.


s/같다/하나다/ or s/같다/한 개다/

기본 값이 1 이라는 의미입니다.

This reverts commit ebe135ccfb072fdfa4e9da2ce277e1b359b3cd4d.

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claudiajkang · 2018-09-17T10:32:58Z

content/ko/docs/tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update/update-intro.html

-                        updates</b> allow Deployments' update to take place with zero downtime by incrementally updating
-                    Pods instances with new ones. The new Pods will be scheduled on Nodes with available resources.</p>
+                <p> 사용자들은 애플리케이션이 항상 가용한 상태일 것이라 여기고 개발자들은 하루에 여러번씩 새로운 버전을
+<<<<<<< HEAD


git 수정 과정에서 수정 내용이 꼬인듯 합니다.
현재라인 <<<<<<< HEAD 부터 아래 35라인 >>>>>>> 06d9d8ec9...까지 두 가지 내용 중 최신 버전의 내용으로만 수정이 필요합니다.

아래 라인(06d9d8e...) 선택해주세요.

gochist

감사합니다! 리뷰 반영해주시면 제가 단일 커밋으로 Squash 해서 Merge할 수 있도록 하겠습니다.

gochist · 2018-09-17T10:51:09Z

content/ko/docs/tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update/update-intro.html

-                    created, is one. Both options can be configured to either numbers or percentages (of Pods).
-                    In Kubernetes, updates are versioned and any Deployment update can be reverted to previous (stable)
-                    version.</p>
+                <p>이전 모듈에서 여러 개의 인스턴스를 동작시키도록 애플리케이션을 스케일 했다. 이것은 애플리케이션의 가용성에 영향을 미치지 않으면서


@zer0big 조치 바랍니다.

gochist · 2018-09-17T10:56:30Z

content/ko/docs/tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update/update-intro.html

-                        updates</b> allow Deployments' update to take place with zero downtime by incrementally updating
-                    Pods instances with new ones. The new Pods will be scheduled on Nodes with available resources.</p>
+                <p> 사용자들은 애플리케이션이 항상 가용한 상태일 것이라 여기고 개발자들은 하루에 여러번씩 새로운 버전을
+<<<<<<< HEAD


아래 라인(06d9d8e...) 선택해주세요.

gochist · 2018-09-18T04:31:39Z

/lgtm

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Korean translation of Home, Setup, Tutorials-Kubernetes Basics, Hello Minikube has been added. * Initial translation of documentation home (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#9) * 번역할 원본 파일 추가 (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#11) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/create-cluster (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#15) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/deploy-app in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#16) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/expose in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#26) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/scale in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#24) * Fix typo from 세트 to 셋 according to 외래어 표기법 3.1.1 (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#31) * Setup page's header and subheader translate into Korean. (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#33) * Translated the welcome page in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#32) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#35) * Translate concepts/_index.md in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#30) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/index.html in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#29) * Translate /tutorials/hello-minikube.md in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#18) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/explore in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#36) * up-to-date on content/ko (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#42) * up-to-date on _index.html (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#41) * Translate tutorials/_index.md in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#44) * Update translation on tutorials/hello-minikube.md (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#45) * Setup page's header and subheader translate into Korean. (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#51) * Update tutorials for consistency (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#48) * up-to-date on content/ko (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#53) Co-authored-by: June Yi <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: Claudia J.Kang <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: zerobig <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: Lawlait <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: Ian Y. Choi <[email protected]>

Korean translation of Home, Setup, Tutorials-Kubernetes Basics, and Hello Minikube has been added. * Initial translation of documentation home (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#9) * 번역할 원본 파일 추가 (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#11) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/create-cluster (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#15) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/deploy-app in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#16) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/expose in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#26) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/scale in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#24) * Fix typo from 세트 to 셋 according to 외래어 표기법 3.1.1 (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#31) * Setup page's header and subheader translate into Korean. (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#33) * Translated the welcome page in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#32) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/update in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#35) * Translate concepts/_index.md in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#30) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/index.html in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#29) * Translate /tutorials/hello-minikube.md in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#18) * Translate tutorials/kubernetes-basics/explore in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#36) * up-to-date on content/ko (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#42) * up-to-date on _index.html (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#41) * Translate tutorials/_index.md in Korean (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#44) * Update translation on tutorials/hello-minikube.md (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#45) * Setup page's header and subheader translate into Korean. (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#51) * Update tutorials for consistency (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#48) * up-to-date on content/ko (kubernetes-retired/kubernetes-docs-ko#53) Co-authored-by: June Yi <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: Claudia J.Kang <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: zerobig <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: Lawlait <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: Ian Y. Choi <[email protected]>

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