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LG-9820 Updated Idv Welcome Screen Content#8097

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🎫 Ticket

LG-9820

📜 Testing Plan

Provide a checklist of steps to confirm the changes.

  • Create a new account
  • Begin identity proofing
  • See new content on the initial Welcome page

👀 Screenshots

If relevant, include a screenshot or screen capture of the changes.

English:

Screen Shot 2023-03-29 at 2 16 03 PM

Spanish:

Screen Shot 2023-03-29 at 2 16 17 PM

French:

Screen Shot 2023-03-29 at 2 16 30 PM

eric-gade added 2 commits March 29, 2023 14:22
changelog: User-Facing Improvements, Content Update, Updating
information on the Idv Welcome Step screen
@eric-gade eric-gade requested a review from a team March 29, 2023 20:10
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Comment on lines +204 to +206
text3_html: '<strong>Verify by phone</strong>: We’ll call or text your phone
number. This takes a few minutes.'
text4_html: '<strong>Verify by mail</strong>: We’ll mail a letter to your home
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I think the numbering here was meant to correspond to the bullet3 heading, so I might expect something like text3a and text3b instead of text3 and text4.

Elsewhere, I've seen a move away from enumerating strings like this and using arrays instead, since it avoids some of the common headaches with numbering manually. Not sure if it'd be a great fit here though.

Example:

<% t('in_person_proofing.process.proof_of_address.acceptable_proof').each do |proof| %>
<li><%= proof %></li>
<% end %>

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Yes, good idea.

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Fixed in 7170f3d

<ul class="usa-list">
<li><%= t('doc_auth.instructions.text3_html') %></li>
<li><%= t('doc_auth.instructions.text4_html') %></li>

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Nit: Could close up the excess spacing here.

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LGTM

Co-authored-by: Andrew Duthie <andrew.duthie@gsa.gov>
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eric-gade and others added 2 commits March 30, 2023 10:28
Co-authored-by: Andrew Duthie <andrew.duthie@gsa.gov>
@eric-gade eric-gade merged commit bc62a32 into main Mar 30, 2023
@eric-gade eric-gade deleted the eric-lg-9280 branch March 30, 2023 15:54
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