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The structure of the document looks good. You can continue expanding on the content. Also, think of the casual Wiki reader and try capturing/visulaizing the summary of key differences in a single subsection right at the beginning of the doc.
Couple of suggestions - make sure you run the doc through a spell check and possibly break long sentences into short ones for improving reader experience.
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@emresurmeli I see that there are suggestions that are yet to be incorporated into the PR. I'm assuming they got minimized on this page. You can view them fully here - https://github.com/w3f/polkadot-wiki/pull/3784/files |
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* Avalanche comparison (#3784) * Add avalanche comparison page and add it to the sidebar * Add Avalanche to the main page intro * Add Avalanche comparison info * Add into, model and architecture sections * Add governance * Add references * Add consensus section * Add staking and message passing * Add upgradibility and conslusion sections * Update docs/learn/learn-comparison-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparison-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparison-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparison-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparison-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparison-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparison-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparison-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparison-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparison-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparison-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparison-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Rename file for conformity * Resources added, remove to do * Improve upon architecture and p/x chain sections * Add comment to add infographics, and add a simple image visualizing ava network architecture * add new section talking about founders and company * Add ava network image * Expand on network info * Expand on consensus and add image * Add consensus image * Expand on metrics that can be changed via governance * Add staking info and remove sharding section as it doesn't exist in Avalanche * Grammarly * Update docs/learn/learn-comparisons-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparisons-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparisons-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparisons-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparisons-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Add BABE and GRANDPA links * Add XCM and XCMP links * Add attributes to image sources * Add Polkadot staking mechanics to the staking section * Rephrase conclusion * Update docs/learn/learn-comparisons-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparisons-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Update docs/learn/learn-comparisons-avalanche.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Clarify Subnet section * Clarify subnets, primary network and fix flow * final touches * Add Image sources to display Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * minor fixes - avalanche page (#3963) * minor fixes - avalanche page * Remove physical realm section As no comparison is provided for Polkadot * Add Staking Page links to Nominator guide (#3965) * Update Kusama Guide link on Nominator page * Add note about Warp syncing (#3940) * Add note about Warp syncing * Reposition the note * Update docs/maintain/maintain-guides-how-to-validate-polkadot.md Co-authored-by: Bastian Köcher <git@kchr.de> * Update maintain-guides-how-to-validate-polkadot.md * Add description for warp sync * add info about default sync settings * minor fix * Add correct info * rephrase Co-authored-by: Bastian Köcher <git@kchr.de> * Update learn-polkadotjs.md (#3968) minor UI issue * Update open source stack (#3964) * Update open source stack Updating the security part, adding clockchain, adding Rust pdotc * add badges Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Adding Primis to the open source stack (#3966) * Adding Primis to the open source stack Adding Primis to the open source stack * Add badge Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * Address regular audit of broken external wiki links (#3969) * start fixing links * address broken link in build-node-management * remove broken link as entire site is offline * restore parachain tutorials * don't pretty format build-open-source and fix or remove broken links * remove support article that is no longer available * update research link * remove another dot leap ref * remove radium blocks as site no longer exists * restore links to Phragmen Voting and Justified Representation paper * Update docs/general/kusama/kusama-community.md Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * update radium block from io to com ext Co-authored-by: Radha <86818441+DrW3RK@users.noreply.github.com> * auction schedule update (#3976) Co-authored-by: Polkadot-Kusama Bot <polkadot-kusama-automation-bot@users.noreply.github.com> * Update status badges (#3977) Co-authored-by: github-actions[bot] <github-actions[bot]@users.noreply.github.com> * Update build-open-source.md (#3975) * NPoS - 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Avalanche comparison draft targeting issue #3301