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Clarify type declaration language in Associated Types docs #35595

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A small fix for the Associated Types docs

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@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ trait Graph {
Simple enough. Associated types use the `type` keyword, and go inside the body
of the trait, with the functions.

These `type` declarations can have all the same thing as functions do. For example,
These `type` declarations work in the same way as those for functions do. For example,
if we wanted our `N` type to implement `Display`, so we can print the nodes out,
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I would:

These type declarations work the same way as those for functions.

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I would:

These type declarations work in the same way as they do for functions.

Thoughts, both of you? The original sentence is very bad :(

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I think @tshepang's version is clearer (I assumed the original was just written late at night / in a state of exhaustion)

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@bors: r+ rollup

thank you!

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bors commented Aug 15, 2016

📌 Commit 31da7f6 has been approved by steveklabnik

sophiajt pushed a commit to sophiajt/rust that referenced this pull request Aug 17, 2016
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Clarify type declaration language in Associated Types docs

A small fix for the Associated Types docs

r? @steveklabnik
bors added a commit that referenced this pull request Aug 17, 2016
sophiajt pushed a commit to sophiajt/rust that referenced this pull request Aug 17, 2016
…=steveklabnik

Clarify type declaration language in Associated Types docs

A small fix for the Associated Types docs

r? @steveklabnik
bors added a commit that referenced this pull request Aug 17, 2016
@bors bors merged commit 31da7f6 into rust-lang:master Aug 17, 2016
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