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@adellape adellape commented May 8, 2015

@liggitt @deads2k PTAL. For the example config files, I grabbed the output from a latest build today. Will probably update these again later, and figure out how to best provide descriptions the parameter stanzas. Will probably end up using callouts on the examples themselves, and use links to relevant topics where appropriate for more detailed usage.

Docs card: https://trello.com/c/acLPulJN

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I tried to get this long sentence broken into two, but I think it's okay to leave it as one. However, I'd wrap that middle part in parentheses, not commas: "The command and its subcommands (master to launch a master server and node to launch a node server) all take a limited set of arguments that are sufficient for launching servers in a development or experimental environment."

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I made a few notes for you, @adellape 👍

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@tpoitras 🙇, will update.

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@adellape adellape force-pushed the master_node_config_edits branch from 0221116 to c4b519d Compare May 20, 2015 18:14
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@tpoitras Edits made per suggestions, thanks.

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Also updated the master and node config file examples per today's build.

@liggitt @deads2k After the build passes, I'm going to going ahead and merge this since I'll need to come back to this topic later for more updates anyway, and will poke for tech review again in that PR.

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Updates/formatting to master_node_configuration
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