reword documentation on nix-copy-closure

doc/manual/src/command-ref/nix-copy-closure.md

@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 # Name
 
-`nix-copy-closure` - copy a closure to or from a remote machine via SSH
+`nix-copy-closure` - copy store objects to or from a remote machine via SSH
 
 # Synopsis
 
 `nix-copy-closure`
-  [`--to` | `--from`]
+  [`--to` _machine_ | `--from` _machine_]
   [`--gzip`]
   [`--include-outputs`]
   [`--use-substitutes` | `-s`]
@@ -14,62 +14,57 @@
 
 # Description
 
-`nix-copy-closure` gives you an easy and efficient way to exchange
-software between machines.  Given one or more Nix store _paths_ on the
-local machine, `nix-copy-closure` computes the closure of those paths
-(i.e. all their dependencies in the Nix store), and copies all paths
-in the closure to the remote machine via the `ssh` (Secure Shell)
-command.  With the `--from` option, the direction is reversed: the
-closure of _paths_ on a remote machine is copied to the Nix store on
-the local machine.
-
-This command is efficient because it only sends the store paths
-that are missing on the target machine.
-
-Since `nix-copy-closure` calls `ssh`, you may be asked to type in the
-appropriate password or passphrase.  In fact, you may be asked _twice_
-because `nix-copy-closure` currently connects twice to the remote
-machine, first to get the set of paths missing on the target machine,
-and second to send the dump of those paths.  When using public key
-authentication, you can avoid typing the passphrase with `ssh-agent`.
+`nix-copy-closure` copies [store objects](@docroot@/glossary.md#gloss-store-object) along with all their dependencies to or from another machine via the SSH protocol.
+It doesn’t copy store objects that are already present on the target machine.
+
+Given one or more _paths_ accesible from the client, `nix-copy-closure` computes the [closure](@docroot@/glossary.md#gloss-closure) of those paths (i.e. all their dependencies in the Nix store), and copies all store objects in the closure to the remote machine via SSH.
+With the `--from` option, the direction is reversed:
+The closure of _paths_ on a remote machine is copied to the specified Nix store accessible from the client.
+
+This command is efficient because it only sends the store paths that are missing on the target machine.
+
+> **Note**
+>
+> While the Nix store to use on the client can be specified on the command line with the [`--store`](@docroot@/command-ref/conf-file.md#conf-store) option, the Nix store to be accessed on the remote machine can only be [configured statically](@docroot@/command-ref/conf-file.md#configuration-file) on that remote machine.
+
+Since `nix-copy-closure` calls `ssh`, you may need to authenticate with the remote machine.
+In fact, you may be asked for authentication _twice_ because `nix-copy-closure` currently connects twice to the remote machine: first to get the set of paths missing on the target machine, and second to send the dump of those paths.
+When using public key authentication, you can avoid typing the passphrase with `ssh-agent`.
 
 # Options
 
-  - `--to`\
-    Copy the closure of _paths_ from the local Nix store to the Nix
-    store on _machine_. This is the default.
+  - `--to` _machine_
+
+    Copy the closure of _paths_ from the local Nix store to the Nix store on _machine_.
+    This is the default.
 
-  - `--from`\
-    Copy the closure of _paths_ from the Nix store on _machine_ to the
-    local Nix store.
+  - `--from` _machine_
+
+    Copy the closure of _paths_ from the Nix store on _machine_ to the local Nix store.
+
+  - `--gzip`
 
-  - `--gzip`\
     Enable compression of the SSH connection.
 
-  - `--include-outputs`\
+  - `--include-outputs`
+
     Also copy the outputs of [store derivation]s included in the closure.
 
     [store derivation]: @docroot@/glossary.md#gloss-store-derivation
 
-  - `--use-substitutes` / `-s`\
-    Attempt to download missing paths on the target machine using Nix’s
-    substitute mechanism.  Any paths that cannot be substituted on the
-    target are still copied normally from the source.  This is useful,
-    for instance, if the connection between the source and target
-    machine is slow, but the connection between the target machine and
-    `nixos.org` (the default binary cache server) is
-    fast.
+  - `--use-substitutes` / `-s`
 
-  - `-v`\
-    Show verbose output.
+    Attempt to download missing store objects on the target from [substituters](@docroot@/command-ref/conf-file.md#conf-substituters).
+    Any store objects that cannot be substituted on the target are still copied normally from the source.
+    This is useful, for instance, if the connection between the source and target machine is slow, but the connection between the target machine and `nixos.org` (the default binary cache server) is fast.
 
 {{#include ./opt-common.md}}
 
 # Environment variables
 
-  - `NIX_SSHOPTS`\
-    Additional options to be passed to `ssh` on the command
-    line.
+  - `NIX_SSHOPTS`
+
+    Additional options to be passed to `ssh` on the command line.
 
 {{#include ./env-common.md}}