[Feedback] Stop including error messages in the feedback body

[jiasli]

Related command
az feedback

Description
Stop including error messages in the feedback body.

[yonzhan]

Az Feedback refinement to fix an issue.

[dcaro]

Suggested change

	_Put here the error message you received. Make sure to redact sensitive information, such as personally identifiable information (PII), user name, password, credential, etc._
	_Insert here the error message you have received. Make sure to redact any sensitive information, such as user name, password, credential, subscription id, etc._

[jiasli]

I think PII is a well-known term. 🙂 https://www.dol.gov/general/ppii

[jiasli]

I choose the word "put" because we already use it in the following section.

azure-cli/src/azure-cli/azure/cli/command_modules/feedback/custom.py

Line 77 in 9cf273b

- _Put any pre-requisite steps here..._

As for "have", do we really have to use present perfect tense? Simple past tense "received" feels good to me. No need to emphasize the "have received" status.

Also, "any" only serves as an emphasis, so it seems a little bit redundant. But, I am not a native speaker, so may be wrong.

[dcaro]

overall lgtm, just a suggestion to improve the message.

[dbradish-microsoft]

I do like @dcaro's rewrite, but I simplified it some more. There isn't anything wrong with using PII, but what is similar for our readers and language translators?

[dbradish-microsoft]

Suggested change

	identifiable information (PII), user name, password, credential, subscription ID, etc.
	_Insert here the error message you have received. Make sure to remove all sensitive information, such as user name, password, credential, subscription ID, etc._

[jiasli]

This line is surrounded by ```, so _ won't work here as italic. I am also wondering which character we should use as a placeholder.

[dbradish-microsoft]

@jiasli , I see you have kept "Insert" vs your preferred "put". Maybe "paste" would be even better, but I'm fine with whatever you use.

[jiasli]

I see you have kept "Insert" vs your preferred "put". Maybe "paste" would be even better, but I'm fine with whatever you use.

Good idea. Changed as suggested.