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@Buzzardo Buzzardo commented Feb 6, 2019

I edited for spelling, punctuation, grammar, usage, and corporate voice. Andy is a pretty good writer, but I caught a few "Britishisms" and made things consistent with our whole family of docs.

I edited for spelling, punctuation, grammar, usage, and corporate voice. Andy is a pretty good writer, but I caught a few "Britishisms" and made things consistent with our whole family of docs.
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This is great. Thanks very much, @Buzzardo. I've left a few comments for your consideration.

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Buzzardo commented Feb 7, 2019

Once you let me know about line 40 in customizing-requests-and-responses.adoc, I'll make a new commit. Thanks for a thorough review.

Andy found a number of flaws in my editing. Apparently, I was having a typo day when I did that editing pass. We also negotiated a better sentence in one spot and fixed up a few other details. Thanks, Andy.
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Buzzardo commented Feb 7, 2019

All set, then. Thanks, Andy. :)

@wilkinsona wilkinsona added the type: documentation Changes to the documentation label Feb 11, 2019
@wilkinsona wilkinsona added this to the 2.0.4.RELEASE milestone Feb 11, 2019
@wilkinsona wilkinsona changed the title Editing pass Improve style and consistency of the documentation Feb 11, 2019
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* gh-575:
  Improve style and consistency of the documentation
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Thanks very much, @Buzzardo. The proposed changes have been merged into master.

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