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When reading this paragraph, the beginning Rust programmer is starting
to write a Hello World program. We have just told her to name the file
main.rs, and immediately afterward, a hello_world.rs is mentioned.
I changed this to an unrelated filename (incidentally one that appears
in this repository) to make it clear that this is just an example.
Also, wording it as a declarative sentence rather than an imperative one
further separates it from the Hello World instructions in this section.

r? @steveklabnik

(Let me know if I'm sending too many PRs -- I can batch up TRPL edits, say, per chapter, if that works better. Or I can just refrain from editing TRPL as I read through it, if these are not sufficiently useful.)

When reading this paragraph, the beginning Rust programmer is starting
to write a Hello World program.  We have just told her to name the file
`main.rs`, and immediately afterward, a `hello_world.rs` is mentioned.
I changed this to an unrelated filename (incidentally one that appears
in this repository) to make it clear that this is just an example.
Also, wording it as a declarative sentence rather than an imperative one
further separates it from the Hello World instructions in this section.
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@bors: r+ 79102e3 rollup

Thanks!

Manishearth added a commit to Manishearth/rust that referenced this pull request Oct 21, 2015
…ichton

When reading this paragraph, the beginning Rust programmer is starting
to write a Hello World program.  We have just told her to name the file
`main.rs`, and immediately afterward, a `hello_world.rs` is mentioned.
I changed this to an unrelated filename (incidentally one that appears
in this repository) to make it clear that this is just an example.
Also, wording it as a declarative sentence rather than an imperative one
further separates it from the Hello World instructions in this section.

r? @steveklabnik 

(Let me know if I'm sending too many PRs -- I can batch up TRPL edits, say, per chapter, if that works better. Or I can just refrain from editing TRPL as I read through it, if these are not sufficiently useful.)
steveklabnik added a commit to steveklabnik/rust that referenced this pull request Oct 22, 2015
…ichton

When reading this paragraph, the beginning Rust programmer is starting
to write a Hello World program.  We have just told her to name the file
`main.rs`, and immediately afterward, a `hello_world.rs` is mentioned.
I changed this to an unrelated filename (incidentally one that appears
in this repository) to make it clear that this is just an example.
Also, wording it as a declarative sentence rather than an imperative one
further separates it from the Hello World instructions in this section.

r? @steveklabnik 

(Let me know if I'm sending too many PRs -- I can batch up TRPL edits, say, per chapter, if that works better. Or I can just refrain from editing TRPL as I read through it, if these are not sufficiently useful.)
steveklabnik added a commit to steveklabnik/rust that referenced this pull request Oct 22, 2015
…ichton

When reading this paragraph, the beginning Rust programmer is starting
to write a Hello World program.  We have just told her to name the file
`main.rs`, and immediately afterward, a `hello_world.rs` is mentioned.
I changed this to an unrelated filename (incidentally one that appears
in this repository) to make it clear that this is just an example.
Also, wording it as a declarative sentence rather than an imperative one
further separates it from the Hello World instructions in this section.

r? @steveklabnik 

(Let me know if I'm sending too many PRs -- I can batch up TRPL edits, say, per chapter, if that works better. Or I can just refrain from editing TRPL as I read through it, if these are not sufficiently useful.)
bors added a commit that referenced this pull request Oct 22, 2015
@alexcrichton alexcrichton merged commit 79102e3 into rust-lang:master Oct 23, 2015
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