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Included review availability: Your plan provides up to 12 included reviews per hour; 11 remain after this review. WalkthroughThe networking requirements and designs define SecurityGroups as attachment-scoped policies. They specify allow-only rules, default denial for unmatched new traffic, and stateless fabric enforcement. Some same-cluster VM traffic may use backend-specific stateful Kubernetes NetworkPolicy enforcement. ChangesSecurityGroup semantics
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AI EP Review: EP-315Score: 8/10 | Verdict: PASS
Verdict: The PRDs collectively define a clear, well-justified unified networking architecture with strong persona coverage and testable requirements, held back from top marks by design leakage (internal enforcement mechanisms in SecurityGroup semantics, CaaS provisioning details) and redundant restatement of SecurityGroup contract across all 7 PRDs. Feedback: Reduce SecurityGroup semantics restatement: define the contract once in the Unified Networking PRD (FR-9/FR-10) and have per-service PRDs reference it with a single sentence rather than restating the full allow-only/stateless/stateful-exception language. This would also improve right-sizing. Rewrite CaaS FR-7 to describe user-observable outcomes ('the system configures network connectivity for selected hosts before cluster provisioning begins') rather than internal provisioning mechanics (provisioning network, fabric_interface move, reboot, DHCP discovery). For the Unified Networking Terminology section, consider moving internal-only concepts (Fabric Manager, K8s Manager, Fabric) to the design document and keeping only tenant/provider-visible concepts in the PRD. Critical (0)None. Important (3)
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AI Design Review: EP-315Score: 8/8 | Verdict: PASS
Verdict: Exceptionally thorough cross-cutting clarification of SecurityGroup semantics across the entire OSAC networking design suite, with consistent terminology, well-articulated enforcement boundaries, and concrete test coverage for the new semantics. Feedback: The design suite is strong. One minor improvement: the unified networking design's Graduation Criteria, Upgrade/Downgrade Strategy, Version Skew Strategy, and Support Procedures sections remain placeholders ('to be completed when targeted at a release'). While the per-service designs fill these in, the parent normative contract would benefit from at least baseline criteria since child designs inherit from it. The open question on Gateway MAC Coordination in the CUDN-EVPN design should be resolved before implementation. Critical (0)None. Important (2)
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In `@enhancements/OSAC-1433-unified-networking/prd.md`:
- Line 457: Correct the checklist marker for the acceptance criterion beginning
“VMs, BM servers, and cluster nodes…” by removing the extra leading hyphen so it
uses a single Markdown list marker and renders as a checkbox like the
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- Line 420: Renumber the SecurityGroup semantics requirement currently labeled
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- Around line 432-434: Apply the immutable SecurityGroup lifecycle consistently
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In `@enhancements/OSAC-1437-bmaas-networking/design.md`:
- Around line 775-778: Remove the multi-interface BM server E2E test requiring
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| | VN create/delete | `fabricManager` | | ||
| | Subnet create/delete | `fabricManager` + `k8sManager` (per hosting cluster) | | ||
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| | SecurityGroup create/delete | No backend for the standalone policy object; attachment reconciliation invokes the applicable enforcement backend | |
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but attachment is using the fabric manager backend
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Clarified in commit eb99dbb: SecurityGroup create/delete has no standalone backend call. When an attachment references the group, attachment reconciliation applies the policy through fabricManager for fabric traffic and may use k8sManager for same-cluster VM-to-VM traffic.
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but attachment is using the fabric manager backend
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Clarified in commit eb99dbb: the SecurityGroup remains a VN-scoped policy object, while the referenced attachment is enforced by fabricManager for fabric traffic or may use k8sManager for same-cluster VM-to-VM traffic. The resource hierarchy now shows that path.
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🟠 Major · Replace the unsupported update wording. · design.md:511-513
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🗄️ Data Integrity & Integration | 🟠 Major | ⚡ Quick winReplace the unsupported update wording.
The API contract at Lines 90-102 allows only create, read, and delete. It also makes SecurityGroup fields and network attachment fields immutable. “Updating a group” and “Removing a reference” describe operations that the API does not support. Reword this paragraph in terms of replacement SecurityGroups and replacement workloads or attachments. Preserve existing bindings until the attached resource is replaced or deleted.
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- Updating a group reconciles only the attachments that reference it. Removing a reference removes enforcement from that attachment without changing other attachments in the same Subnet. + Creating a replacement SecurityGroup does not alter existing attachment bindings. New attachment references are reconciled to the replacement group. Replacing an attached resource without the reference removes enforcement from the replacement attachment without changing other attachments in the same Subnet.🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
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In `@enhancements/OSAC-1433-unified-networking/design.md`:
- Around line 511-513: Reword the paragraph around the SecurityGroup attachment
reconciliation behavior to describe only supported replacement, create, and
delete operations: creating a replacement SecurityGroup must not alter existing
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| effective only when referenced by a resource network attachment. Its rules |
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This moves the responsibility of implementing the SecurityGroup to the as-a-service implementation rather than to the networking controllers.
For example, if the securityGroup takes effect only when added to the networkAttachements of the BMI, then the BMI controller will be the one responsible for configuring the router/firewall or whatever the backend is using.
IMO, this is not a good architecture and we are trying to mitigate this kind of behavior on existing flows in https://redhat.atlassian.net/browse/OSAC-5235
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How about we create a NetworkAttachment new CRD in the networking API that can bind any resource (BM, VM, Cluster node) to a network resource such as:
- ExternalIP - it will replace the
ExternalIPAttachementexisting CRD - Subnet - it will solve https://redhat.atlassian.net/browse/OSAC-5235
- SecurityGroup - it will solve the requirement of this PR
| A SecurityGroup is created in and belongs to a VirtualNetwork, but creating it | ||
| has no standalone data-plane effect. A SecurityGroup becomes | ||
| effective only when referenced by a resource network attachment. Its rules | ||
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Won't it be easier for us to apply the SecurityGroup at the VN layer instead of per resource?
Since networking controllers are reconciling the network (and not as-a-service resources themselvs) I wonder why don't we just set rules on the gateway.
AFAIU, resource to resource rules can still be applied by setting the source/dest CIDR to a /32 mask and it also allows to set a wider policy per network rather than doing it per resource.
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