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Fix English Docs to sound more natural...for the most part.

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Node generator is a command line tool to generate Node-RED node modules from several various sources, including Open API document and function node's source.
Using this tool, node developers can dramatically reduce their time to implement Node-RED node modules.
Node generator is a command line tool to generate Node-RED nodes based on various source code such as an Open API document or a Function node.
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source code such as - > sources such as

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Node generator is a command line tool to generate Node-RED node modules from several various sources, including Open API document and function node's source.
Using this tool, node developers can dramatically reduce their time to implement Node-RED node modules.
Node generator is a command line tool to generate Node-RED nodes based on various source code such as an Open API document or a Function node.
It helps Node developers dramatically reduce the time to implement Node-RED nodes.
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It helps Node developers -> It helps developers

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But in terms of marketing, instead of http request node, the original node for the cloud services will be effective to increase the number of users because details of node properties, node information and documents will contribute to the usability of the node.
In general, cloud service providers publish Open API document with REST API for users to test it on Swagger UI.
Node generator uses this Open API document to create nodes for connection to the cloud service.
From a marketing perspective, instead of using the http request node, an original node for a cloud service is more effective to increase the number of users because having details of node properties, node information and documents can help contribute to the usability of the node.
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maybe instead - 'From a marketing perspective, having a dedicated node for a cloud service is more attractive to users because having preset node properties, and targeted information and documents can help improve the usability of the node.

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Node generator will support Web of Things description to create original nodes.
Currently, there are [the slide](https://github.com/w3c/wot/blob/master/plugfest/2018-bundang/images/Plugfest-Bundang-WoT.pdf) and [the screenshot](https://github.com/w3c/wot/blob/master/plugfest/2018-bundang/result-hitachi.md) of the prototype implementation on GitHub.
Node generator will support the Web of Things specification to create original nodes.
Currently, there is [the slide](https://github.com/w3c/wot/blob/master/plugfest/2018-bundang/images/Plugfest-Bundang-WoT.pdf) and [the screenshot](https://github.com/w3c/wot/blob/master/plugfest/2018-bundang/result-hitachi.md) of the prototype implementation on GitHub.
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the slide - > a slide
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the screenshot -> a screenshot

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The current version of Node generator supports function node and Open API document as source files.
Simply, Node generator command, node-red-nodegen converts to a node from the file which is specified in the argument of the command as follows.
The Node generator command, node-red-nodegen creates a node from the file which is specified in the argument of the command as follows.
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The Node generator command, node-red-nodegen creates a node -> node-red-nodegen creates a node

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On the palette of Node-RED flow editor, the generated node is in the function category by default.
To change the category or use the product name, you can use --category option.
For example, the generated node which the following command outputs will be in the "analysis" category on the Node-RED flow editor.
For example, the generated node from the following command can be viewed in the "analysis" category on the Node-RED flow editor.
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the generated node from the -> the node generated from the

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On the palette of Node-RED flow editor, the generated node is in the function category as the default.
To change the category or use product name, you can use --category option.
For example, the generated node which the following command outputs will be in the "analysis" category on Node-RED flow editor.
For example, the generated node from the following command can be viewed in the "analysis" category on the Node-RED flow editor.
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the generated node from the -> the node generated from the

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#### Test cases
The set of test cases is the most important to maintain the quality of the generated node in production use.
The set of test cases is important to maintaining the quality of the generated node in production use.
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important to maintaining the -> important in order to maintain the

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dceejay commented Jun 30, 2019

I added some comments to your comments - but yes - good work.

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@dceejay Thank you! I have updated the PR to reflect your suggestions.

@kazuhitoyokoi kazuhitoyokoi merged commit 9647cf3 into node-red:master Jul 1, 2019
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@chantlong @dceejay Thank you for your contribution! I learned them.

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