Edited doc to improve readability

[noxian-byte]

Proposed changes

Problem: The page had not been revised since May 2024.

Solution:

• None of the screenshots contain Personally Identifying Information (PII)
• The screenshots only contain information that is needed to follow the documentation
• The only screenshot that may need an update is the UI that is in section 'Enabling Live Activity Monitoring'
• Edits have been made to improve readability of the text

Please focus on (optional): I used the Hemingway Editor as instructed and have noticed that most of the sentences were marked as hard to read simply because of the length.How much emphasis is placed on reducing word count when readability is a priority?

This PR addresses Issue #138

[ADubhlaoich]

How much emphasis is placed on reducing word count when readability is a priority?

If you can find ways to shorten sentences, I generally advocate for it. Longer sentences aren't necessarily better ones.

[ADubhlaoich]

Generally LGTM!

Making sure @y82 is tagged as the assigned TW (technical writer) for NGINX Plus: I'm going to flag the use of links internally.

We want all our links handled using Hugo references, and have a directive to avoid any inline HTML.

[mjang]

How much emphasis is placed on reducing word count when readability is a priority?

If you can find ways to shorten sentences, I generally advocate for it. Longer sentences aren't necessarily better ones.

Readability calculators such as Flesch-Kincaid credit shorter sentences and words with fewer syllables. Here's their equation:

(0.39 * (words / sentences)) + (11.8 * (syllables / words)) - 15.59

[mjang]

Note: I've corrected the entry which refers to Nginx. We use NGINX in our documentation.

[mjang]

@noxian-byte thank you for your contribution!