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jaesius committed May 24, 2021
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Traditional computer sciences are great, but hands-on experience
with modern platforms positions you as a more competitive
candidate. The New Relic Student Edition gives you access to the
same industry tools that observability professionals use -- for
same industry tools that observability professionals use--for
free.
</p>
<p>
Whether you’re just getting started with your engineering
career, looking to pivot, or an educator ready to share the
value of modern technology - we’ve got you covered. From access
to the best-in-class observability platform, training, and
certifications, you’ll have access to everything you need to
journey, looking to pivot into a career in tech, or an educator
ready to share the value of modern technology, we’ve got you
covered. With our training, certifications, and best-in-class
observability platform you'll have everything you need to
compete in the market.
</p>
<p>
We are excited to announce the New Relic Student Edition as an
We're excited to announce the New Relic Student Edition as an
exclusive offer in the GitHub Student Developer Pack. GitHub
created the Student Developer Pack to help students ship
software like a pro, and with New Relic, the Student Edition
adds to making that possible.
software like pros, and the New Relic Student Edition
contributes to that goal.
</p>
<p>
To get access to the Student Edition,{' '}
To access the Student Edition,{' '}
<a href="/">sign up for a free account</a> and verify your
student status using the GitHub Student Developer Pack
</p>
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Account
</h3>
<p className={styles.stepDetail}>
To access the Student Edition you will need a New Relic
free-tier account. After you will need to verify your
student status.
To access the Student Edition, create a free New Relic
account. After that, verify your student status.
</p>

<Button
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variant={Button.VARIANT.PRIMARY}
className={styles.stepButton}
>
Signup for a free account
Sign up for a free account
</Button>
</Surface>
<Surface
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<a href="https://education.GitHub.com/benefits">
GitHub Student Developer Pack
</a>
. If you don't have access to GitHub Students, and verify
your account.
. If you don't have access to GitHub Students, sign up and
verify your account.
</p>

<Button
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<div className={styles.stepNumber}>3</div>
<h3 className={styles.stepHeader}>Enjoy Using New Relic</h3>
<p className={styles.stepDetail}>
After your status is verified. Your Student Edition account
will be created giving you 3 full users and 500GB of data
ingest.
After your status is verified, your account is upgraded to
the Student Edition, giving you three full users and 500GB
of data ingest.
</p>

<Button
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name="users"
size="4rem"
/>
<h4>Three Full Users</h4>
<h4>Three full users</h4>
<p>
Work with your friends and classmates like a real-world
production team
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name="database"
size="4rem"
/>
<h4>500 GB/month of Data Ingest</h4>
<h4>500 GB/month of data ingest</h4>
<p>
Collect, analyze, and alert on all your metrics, events, logs,
and traces from any source
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name="cpu"
size="4rem"
/>
<h4>Free Tier AI</h4>
<h4>Free-tier AI</h4>
<p>
Instantly detect, diagnose, and resolve issues before they
become a problem
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<p>
New Relic offers the Student Edition exclusively through the
GitHub Student Pack. To verify your account's eligibility,
please authorize your Github account.
authorize your GitHub account.
</p>
<p>
Learn more about GitHub Education if you don't have GitHub
Student Developer Pack yet.
</p>
<ul>
<li>
Sign up up for Student Edition - you will be prompted to
create or log in to your GitHub account
Sign up for Student Edition. You will be prompted to create
or log in to your GitHub account
</li>
<li>
Apply for the GitHub Student Developer Pack, which requires
proof of enrollment in an accredited institution.
proof of enrollment in an accredited institution
</li>
<li>
Once you’re verified through GitHub, sign in to Student
Edition with the token emailed to you to get started.{' '}
Once you’re verified through GitHub, sign in to the Student
Edition with the token emailed to you to get started{' '}
</li>
</ul>
</div>
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Can I share my Student Edition with friends?
</p>
<p className={styles.answer}>
The student edition comes with 3 FSO users. Your friends and
classmates are also welcome to sign up for their own free
The student edition comes with three full users. Your friends
and classmates are also welcome to sign up for their own free
account.
</p>
</div>
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GitHub?
</p>
<p className={styles.answer}>
In your GitHub account settings, visit Applications > Authorized
OAuth Apps to check whether you have authorized the New Relic
OAuth app. If you granted this application access to your GitHub
account, you should hear back from GitHub as soon as they have
verified your student status.
In your GitHub account settings, visit{' '}
<strong>Applications > Authorized OAuth Apps</strong> to check
whether you have authorized the New Relic OAuth app. If you
granted this application access to your GitHub account, you
should hear back from GitHub as soon as they have verified your
student status.
</p>
</div>
<div className={styles.group}>
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</tr>
<tr>
<td>Free Data</td>
<td>500 gb/m</td>
<td>100 gb/m</td>
<td>500 GB/mo</td>
<td>100 GB/mo</td>
</tr>
<tr>
<td>Production Use</td>
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