Fix some typos in release instructions

[kevin-bates]

While looking into adopting recent build framework changes in another repo, I ran into a couple of (minor) issues with the recently-added hatchling instructions. I also took the liberty to update the variable script_version to new_version to have parity with its prompt (as well as dev_version).

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[blink1073]

Thanks!