update: developers/docs/consensus-mechanisms/pos/block-proposal content

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[corwintines]

Any reason for this big rewrite @rahimira2? On a quick skim, this looks like the same content just reformatted more or less.

This would have large implications on the translations so I don't want to bring in without hearing your reason for rewriting first.

@mnelsonBT would also be curious what you think about this.

[mnelsonBT]

Any reason for this big rewrite @rahimira2? On a quick skim, this looks like the same content just reformatted more or less.

This would have large implications on the translations so I don't want to bring in without hearing your reason for rewriting first.

@mnelsonBT would also be curious what you think about this.

Thanks @corwintines - appreciate you calling out the translation considerations for updating this documentation.

Some of these edits do help improve the page's clarity and format (for ex. I think it's great to add the bulleted list of resources under Prerequisites). I agree with you though that keeping these foundational docs translate-able is top priority.
Some changes will be more difficult to translate out of English; removing non-technical descriptors to achieve brevity also removes the context that helps technical jargon translate. A few of these edits also remove background context that is helpful to provide in this "Foundational topics" non-advanced docs section.

Any info you have here on rationale/goals would be helpful @rahimira2 , thanks!

I can review to suggest changes on a few spots where it would be helpful to bring back original context or language. It would be helpful to have your feedback/goals in mind when doing so.

[corwintines]

Just a bump on this @rahimira2

[github-actions]

This issue is stale because it has been open 30 days with no activity.

[wackerow]

@rahimira2 Do me a favor and fill in the PR description with the goals of this update, thanks!

[wackerow]

Closing out as stale pending requested information