doc(tutorial): clean up minor typos/grammar issues in index

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This PR cleans up a few minor typos and grammar issues on the tutorial index page

Summary by CodeRabbit

• Documentation
  • Corrected grammar, wording, and capitalization across the tutorial for improved readability.
  • Clarified task descriptions and section intros for clearer guidance.
  • Updated example content and outputs (demonstrating a changed server response) to match revised explanations.
  • Replaced ambiguous phrases with precise instructions and tightened concluding text for better narrative flow.

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Walkthrough

Documentation edits to the tutorial: grammar and wording corrections, clarified instructions, and updated example outputs (server response changed from "Hello World!" to "Hello Elysia!"). No API or exported entity changes.

Changes

Cohort / File(s)	Summary of Changes
Docs: Tutorial text and examples docs/tutorial/index.md	Grammar and wording fixes; clarified task descriptions and labels; capitalization adjustments; updated code example and explanatory text to use "Hello Elysia!"; minor narrative refinements only.

Estimated code review effort

🎯 2 (Simple) | ⏱️ ~10 minutes

Possibly related PRs

• Docs: fix grammar in tutorial intro (Remove redundant adverbs) #755: Overlapping grammar and wording edits to docs/tutorial/index.md.
• doc(tutorial): clean up minor typos/grammar issues in index #653: Same editorial changes and the identical example update from "Hello World!" to "Hello Elysia!".

Poem

I twitch my whiskers, hop through docs so bright,
Swapping words like carrots—crisp and light.
“Hello Elysia!” now greets the line,
Headings trimmed and commas shine.
Thump-thump, the tutorial hops into sight. 🥕

Pre-merge checks and finishing touches

✅ Passed checks (3 passed)

Check name	Status	Explanation
Description Check	✅ Passed	Check skipped - CodeRabbit’s high-level summary is enabled.
Title Check	✅ Passed	The title succinctly describes the primary change by indicating that minor typos and grammar issues are being cleaned up in the tutorial index, aligning directly with the content changes made in the pull request.
Docstring Coverage	✅ Passed	No functions found in the changes. Docstring coverage check skipped.

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I wasn't sure exactly what was meant here, but I think this might be right?