GITBOOK-880: Natália's Aug 30 changes

company/our-culture/rocket.chat-rockstars.md

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-description: Receive stars for representing our culture and exchange them for prizes!
+description: Collect stars for representing our culture and exchange them for prizes!
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 # Rocket.Chat RockStars
 
-Our culture is one of our biggest strengths within Rocket.Chat, and we want to recognize the actions that promote it, so welcome to Rocket.Chat RockStars! Our system enables you to collect stars by representing the DOTS or on specific dates and occasions, accumulating them, and exchanging them for prizes!
+Our culture is one of the most significant strengths within Rocket.Chat, and we want to acknowledge actions that promote it. Welcome to Rocket.Chat RockStars! Our system enables you to earn stars by embodying the DOTS values or by participating in specific events and occasions. You can accumulate these stars and exchange them for prizes. 
 
-We buy all products within the stars program through [Printful](https://www.printful.com/custom-products), where you can check the entire catalog of products and colors (you can also buy some of them through the[ Shopify store](https://rocket-chat.myshopify.com/)).
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-We also have a quarterly ceremony related to our DOTS and the Koko Thanks category! More on that is on the next page.
+All products within the stars program are purchased through [Printful](https://www.printful.com/uk/custom-products), where you can browse the entire catalogue of products and colours. Some items are also available for purchase through the [Shopify](https://rocket-chat.myshopify.com/) store. 
 
 ### What type of stars can I get?
 
 We have three types of points:
 
-* **Request and Collect -** whenever you do any action in this category, such as presenting a Rocket.Chats, you can submit this action for approval from our Avengers in the system and collect your stars!
-* **Automatic -** collected on special days, such as birthdays, time on company anniversaries, or after using the rocketchat-thanks channel to praise someone!
-* **Given by the tool admin -** these stars will be added to you by the admin of the specific tool every time you, for example, complete your IDP or 100% of the Check-in. In this case, a Qulture.Rocks admin will assign your stars to you inside the system.
+* **Request and Collect:** Whenever you perform an action in this category, you can submit this action for approval to our Avengers within the system (Zoho People) and collect your stars!
+* **Automatic Collection:** Stars are automatically collected on special occasions, such as birthdays, company anniversaries, or when you use the rocketchat-thanks channel to express gratitude for someone.
+* **Admin Allocation:** These stars will be added to your account by the administrator of the specific tool. For instance, you'll receive stars from the Qulture.Rocks admin each time you complete your IDP or achieve 100% completion of the Check-in. In this case, the Qulture.Rocks admin will assign the stars to you within the system.
 
-Now let's see the full [table of actions and events](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1GfdttY-0eFtzY5ZerPKRaAwvSQGaxjbFSZsa4RoebuA/edit#gid=0) in these categories and how many stars they can get you:
+Let's take a look at the complete [list of actions and events](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1GfdttY-0eFtzY5ZerPKRaAwvSQGaxjbFSZsa4RoebuA/edit#gid=0) in each category and the number of stars you can get:
 
 <figure><img src="../../.gitbook/assets/RockStars.png" alt=""><figcaption></figcaption></figure>
 
-### **Important notes about some categories:**
+### Important Notes:
 
-1. The categories **Share content selected to be promoted** and **Create an original post for LinkedIn** are monthly only, meaning you can get that point once a month. The Marketing team assigns monthly campaigns applicable to these categories: you can get these stars just by sharing the selected content on LinkedIn or by writing your post directed to that campaign!
-2. As mentioned before, for **Completing a course** and **Years in company anniversary**, your total of stars will be the base value multiplied by the course number of hours or by the number of years you're celebrating. For the first one, the maximum of stars you can get for a course is 50.
+1. The categories **share content selected to be promoted** and **create an original post for LinkedIn** are monthly only, meaning you can get that point once a month. The Marketing team assigns monthly campaigns applicable to these categories: You can get these stars just by sharing the selected content on LinkedIn or by writing your post directed to that campaign!
+2. As mentioned before, for c**ompleting a course** and y**ears in company anniversary**, your total of stars will be the base value multiplied by the course number of hours or by the number of years you're celebrating. For the first one, the maximum of stars you can get for a course is 50.
 3. The **Koko 1:1** category gets you the stars if you do at least **one random 1:1 in the month**, and the same logic applies to the **Koko Thanks,** which works if you give or receive at least one thanks in the month.
 4. The **Book Club categories** follow the rules you'll find [here in the handbook](https://handbook.rocket.chat/company/people/developing-yourself/the-book-club) too.
-5. The **Check-in and IDP** categories are taken directly from Qulture.Rocks reports.
+5. The **Check-in and IDP** categories are taken directly from Qulture.Rocks report.
 6. For **Father's and Mother's Day**, you need to fill in a field in your Zoho People profile for it to be automatically collected. Note that you must be a Mother or Father to get these points.
 
 ### How to request my stars?
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 When you want to trade your star for a Rocket.Chat swag, follow the same path as you did before (Zoho People > Compensation > RockStars) when requesting it inside Zoho People, but this time you'll select Debit. Follow these steps:
 
 1. Select **Debit**, the item you want, and fill out the points field with how much it costs. Remember to always check your star balance before requesting the item to make sure you have enough to get it!
-2. Then you just have to wait for an Avenger to approve your item request, and once we fulfill the order, your new Rocketeer swag is on its way to you! (It may take a while to reach you since they ship it overseas. If your country's postal service usually tends to stop any foreign order, you can request and add a note that you'll want to retrieve your item during our next Summit we'll make sure it gets to you then).
+2. Then you just have to wait for an Avenger to approve your item request, and once we fulfil the order, your new Rocketeer swag is on its way to you! (It may take a while to reach you since they ship it overseas. If your country's postal service usually tends to stop any foreign order, you can request and add a note that you'll want to retrieve your item during our next Summit we'll make sure it gets to you then).
 
 ## **Now let's talk prizes!**