Merge pull request #447 from alexbuckgit/alex/fixes-350

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docs/cloud-adoption/governance/governance-disciplines.md

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 title: "The Five Disciplines of Cloud Governance"
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-description: Overview of governance content within the Cloud Adoption Framework
+description: Learn about the Five Disciplines of Cloud Governance in the Cloud Adoption Framework.
 author: BrianBlanchard
 ms.author: brblanch
 ms.date: 02/11/2019
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-Any change to business processes or technology platforms introduces risk. Cloud Governance teams, whose members are sometimes known as cloud custodians, are tasked with mitigating these risks, with minimal interruption to adoption or innovation efforts.<br/><br/>The Cloud Adoption Framework governance model guides these decisions (regardless of the chosen cloud platform) by focusing on [development of corporate policy](./corporate-policy.md) and the [Five Disciplines of Cloud Governance](#disciplines-of-cloud-governance). [Actionable design guides](./actionable-journeys/index.md) demonstrate this model using Azure services. This landing page lists the disciplines of the Cloud Adoption Framework governance model.
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-<i>Figure 1. Diagram of corporate policy and the Five Disciplines of Cloud Governance</i>
+    Any change to business processes or technology platforms introduces risk. Cloud governance teams, whose members are sometimes known as cloud custodians, are tasked with mitigating these risks and ensuring minimal interruption to adoption or innovation efforts.<br/><br/>The Cloud Adoption Framework governance model guides these decisions (regardless of the chosen cloud platform) by focusing on <a href="./corporate-policy.md">development of corporate policy]</a> and the <a href="#disciplines-of-cloud-governance">Five Disciplines of Cloud Governance</a>. <a href="./journeys/index.md">Actionable design guides</a> demonstrate this model using Azure services. Learn about the disciplines of the Cloud Adoption Framework governance model below.
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 ## Disciplines of Cloud Governance
 
-Across each cloud provider, there are common governance disciplines that can serve as a guide to help inform policies and align toolchains. These disciplines guide decisions regarding the proper level of automation and enforcement of corporate policy across cloud providers.
+With any cloud platform, there are common governance disciplines that help inform policies and align toolchains. These disciplines guide decisions about the proper level of automation and enforcement of corporate policy across cloud platforms.
 
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                         <h3>Security Baseline</h3>
-                        <p>Security is a complex and personal topic, unique to each company. Once security requirements are established, cloud governance policies and enforcement applies those requirements across network, data and asset configurations.</p>
+                        <p>Security is a complex topic, unique to each company. Once security requirements are established, cloud governance policies and enforcement apply those requirements across network, data, and asset configurations.</p>
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                         <h3>Identity Baseline</h3>
-                        <p>Inconsistencies in the application of identity requirements can increase the risk of breach. The Identity Baseline discipline focuses on ways to ensure identity is consistently applied across cloud adoption efforts.</p>
+                        <p>Inconsistencies in the application of identity requirements can increase the risk of breach. The Identity Baseline discipline focuses ensuring that identity is consistently applied across cloud adoption efforts.</p>
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                         <h3>Resource Consistency</h3>
-                        <p>Cloud operations depends on consistency in resource configuration. Through governance tooling, resources can consistently be configured to manage risks related to on-boarding, drift, discoverability, and recovery.</p>
+                        <p>Cloud operations depend on consistent resource configuration. Through governance tooling, resources can be configured consistently to manage risks related to onboarding, drift, discoverability, and recovery.</p>
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                         <h3>Deployment Acceleration</h3>
-                        <p>Centralization, standardization, and consistency in deployment and configuration approaches improve governance practices. When made available through cloud-based governance tooling, they create a cloud factor that can accelerate deployment activities.</p>
+                        <p>Centralization, standardization, and consistency in approaches to deployment and configuration improve governance practices. When provided through cloud-based governance tooling, they create a cloud factor that can accelerate deployment activities.</p>
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