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Docs: Small typo and proofreading edits (#2078)
* Slight rewording of DS3 game page Lists made more concise, space added between "generated weapons" and open parenthesis * Proofread Final Fantasy pages Fixed minor typos and reworded sentences for conciseness. * Edited Kingdom Hearts 2 Game Page Refined style, capitalization, and sentence structure for clarity * Fixed nested list in Minecraft game page Each nest needed an additional 2 spaces * Edited Risk of Rain 2 Game Page Made various edits to redundancy within the page as well as omitted/unclear information * Edited Stardew Valley game page Small capitalization consistency edits and slight rewording for conciseness * Update worlds/ff1/docs/multiworld_en.md Co-authored-by: Silvris <[email protected]> * Update worlds/kh2/docs/en_Kingdom Hearts 2.md Co-authored-by: Silvris <[email protected]> * Update worlds/kh2/docs/en_Kingdom Hearts 2.md Co-authored-by: Silvris <[email protected]> * Add information for EXP multiplier Include Drive Forms and Summons * Correction for Newt Altars RoR2 Co-Authored-By: kindasneaki <[email protected]> --------- Co-authored-by: Silvris <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: kindasneaki <[email protected]>
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worlds/dark_souls_3/docs/en_Dark Souls III.md

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## What does randomization do to this game?
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In Dark Souls III, all unique items you can earn from a static corpse, a chest or the death of a Boss/NPC are
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In Dark Souls III, all unique items you can earn from a static corpse, chest, or the death of a Boss/NPC are
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randomized.
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An option is available from the settings page to also randomize the upgrade materials, the Estus shards and the
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consumables.
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Another option is available to randomize the level of the generated weapons(from +0 to +10/+5)
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An option is available from the settings page to also randomize upgrade materials, Estus shards, and consumables.
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Another option is available to randomize the level of the generated weapons (from +0 to +10/+5).
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To beat the game you need to collect the 4 "Cinders of a Lord" randomized in the multiworld
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and kill the final boss "Soul of Cinder"
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To beat the game, you need to collect the 4 "Cinders of a Lord" randomized in the multiworld
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and kill the final boss "Soul of Cinder."
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## What Dark Souls III items can appear in other players' worlds?
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Every unique item from Dark Souls III can appear in other player's worlds, such as a piece of armor, an upgraded weapon,
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or a key item.
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Every unique item from Dark Souls III can appear in other player's worlds, such as a piece of armor, upgraded weapons,
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## What does another world's item look like in Dark Souls III?
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worlds/ff1/docs/en_Final Fantasy.md

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A better questions is what isn't randomized at this point. Enemies stats and spell, character spells, shop inventory and
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boss stats and spells are all commonly randomized. Unlike most other randomizers it is also most standard to shuffle
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progression items and non-progression items into separate pools and then redistribute them to their respective
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locations. So, for example, Princess Sarah may have the CANOE instead of the LUTE; however, she will never have a Heal
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Pot or some armor. There are plenty of other things that can be randomized on the main randomizer
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site: [FF1R Website](https://finalfantasyrandomizer.com/)
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Enemy stats and spell, boss stats and spells, character spells, and shop inventories are all commonly randomized. Unlike
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most other randomizers, it is standard to shuffle progression items and non-progression items into separate pools
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and then redistribute them to their respective locations. For example, Princess Sarah may have the CANOE instead
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of the LUTE; however, she will never have a Heal Pot or armor.
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[FF1R Website](https://finalfantasyrandomizer.com/)
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## What Final Fantasy items can appear in other players' worlds?
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All items can appear in other players worlds. This includes consumables, shards, weapons, armor and, of course, key
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items.
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All items can appear in other players worlds, including consumables, shards, weapons, armor, and key items.
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## What does another world's item look like in Final Fantasy
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All local and remote items appear the same. It will say that you received an item and then BOTH the client log and the
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All local and remote items appear the same. Final Fantasy will say that you received an item, then BOTH the client log and the
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emulator will display what was found external to the in-game text box.

worlds/ff1/docs/multiworld_en.md

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prefer, or it is your first time we suggest starting with the 'Shard Hunt' preset (which requires you to collect a
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number of shards to go to the end dungeon) or the 'Beginner' preset if you prefer to kill the original fiends.
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2. Go to the `Goal` tab and ensure `Archipelago` is enabled. Set your player name to any name that represents you.
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3. Upload you `Final Fantasy(USA).nes` (and click `Remember ROM` for the future!)
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3. Upload your `Final Fantasy(USA).nes` (and click `Remember ROM` for the future!)
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It should download two files. One is the `*.nes` file which your emulator will run and the other is the yaml file
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It should download two files. One is the `*.nes` file which your emulator will run, and the other is the yaml file
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At this point you are ready to join the multiworld. If you are uncertain on how to generate, host or join a multiworld
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At this point, you are ready to join the multiworld. If you are uncertain on how to generate, host, or join a multiworld,
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This randomizer takes Kingdom Hearts 2 and randomizes the locations of the items for a more dynamic play experience. The items that randomize currently are all items within Chests, Popups, Get Bonuses, Form Levels, and Sora's Levels. This allows abilities that Sora would normally have to also be placed on Keyblades with random stats. With several options on ways to finish the game.
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This randomizer creates a more dynamic play experience by randomizing the locations of most items in Kingdom Hearts 2. Currently all items within Chests, Popups, Get Bonuses, Form Levels, and Sora's Levels are randomized. This allows abilities that Sora would normally have to be placed on Keyblades with random stats. Additionally, there are several options for ways to finish the game, allowing for different goals beyond beating the final boss.
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- Get Bonuses
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- Keyblade Stats
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<h2 style="text-transform:none";>What Kingdom Hearts 2 items can appear in other players' worlds?</h2>
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Every item in the game except for party members' abilities.
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<h2 style="text-transform:none";>What Happens if I die before Room Saving?</h2>
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When you die in vanilla Kingdom Hearts 2, you are reverted to the last non-boss room you entered and your status is reverted to what it was at that time. However, in archipelago, any item that you have sent/received will not be taken away from the player, any chest you have opened will remain open, and you will keep your level, but lose the experience.
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