From 8bba4553235987ada1782288755c9946a3c7f6e8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ed Page <eopage@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 3 Sep 2026 13:49:40 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] fix(git): Make PR dep note cloer to our style guide

---
 src/sources/git/utils.rs      | 7 +++----
 tests/testsuite/bad_config.rs | 7 +++----
 tests/testsuite/patch.rs      | 7 +++----
 3 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/sources/git/utils.rs b/src/sources/git/utils.rs
index a19b23f1fd7..b3c4f3c4669 100644
--- a/src/sources/git/utils.rs
+++ b/src/sources/git/utils.rs
@@ -1873,10 +1873,9 @@ pub(crate) fn note_github_pull_request(url: &str) -> Option<String> {
             let rev = format!("refs/pull/{pr_number}/head");
             return Some(format!(
                 concat!(
-                    "\n\nnote: GitHub url {} is not a repository. \n",
-                    "help: Replace the dependency with \n",
-                    "       `git = \"{}\" rev = \"{}\"` \n",
-                    "   to specify pull requests as dependencies' revision."
+                    "\n\nnote: GitHub url {} is not a repository\n",
+                    "help: to specify a pull request as a dependency, replace the dependency with:\n",
+                    "       `git = \"{}\" rev = \"{}\"`",
                 ),
                 url, repo_url, rev
             ));
diff --git a/tests/testsuite/bad_config.rs b/tests/testsuite/bad_config.rs
index ea8602bb9cd..069b7562088 100644
--- a/tests/testsuite/bad_config.rs
+++ b/tests/testsuite/bad_config.rs
@@ -2368,10 +2368,9 @@ Caused by:
 Caused by:
   unable to update https://github.com/rust-lang/does-not-exist/pull/123
 ...
-  [NOTE] GitHub url https://github.com/rust-lang/does-not-exist/pull/123 is not a repository. 
-  [HELP] Replace the dependency with 
-         `git = "https://github.com/rust-lang/does-not-exist.git" rev = "refs/pull/123/head"` 
-     to specify pull requests as dependencies' revision.
+  [NOTE] GitHub url https://github.com/rust-lang/does-not-exist/pull/123 is not a repository
+  [HELP] to specify a pull request as a dependency, replace the dependency with:
+         `git = "https://github.com/rust-lang/does-not-exist.git" rev = "refs/pull/123/head"`
 ...
 "#]])
         .run();
diff --git a/tests/testsuite/patch.rs b/tests/testsuite/patch.rs
index ba0a78cb48a..3cc58172652 100644
--- a/tests/testsuite/patch.rs
+++ b/tests/testsuite/patch.rs
@@ -411,10 +411,9 @@ Caused by:
   if a proxy or similar is necessary `net.git-fetch-with-cli` may help here
   https://doc.rust-lang.org/cargo/reference/config.html#netgit-fetch-with-cli
 
-  [NOTE] GitHub url https://github.com/rust-lang/does-not-exist/pull/123 is not a repository. 
-  [HELP] Replace the dependency with 
-         `git = "https://github.com/rust-lang/does-not-exist.git" rev = "refs/pull/123/head"` 
-     to specify pull requests as dependencies' revision.
+  [NOTE] GitHub url https://github.com/rust-lang/does-not-exist/pull/123 is not a repository
+  [HELP] to specify a pull request as a dependency, replace the dependency with:
+         `git = "https://github.com/rust-lang/does-not-exist.git" rev = "refs/pull/123/head"`
 
 Caused by:
 ...