From 71a697327bd64bdebcdf81b10c3dd03dfe33cb68 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: carschandler <92899389+carschandler@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 5 Feb 2024 15:23:05 -0600
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Update E0716.md for clarity

When reading through this, I got slightly hung up thinking the `let` it was referring to was the `let tmp` on line 25, which was confusing considering the comment states that the temporary is freed at the end of the block. I think adding this clarification could potentially help some beginners like myself without being overly verbose.
---
 compiler/rustc_error_codes/src/error_codes/E0716.md | 5 +++--
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/compiler/rustc_error_codes/src/error_codes/E0716.md b/compiler/rustc_error_codes/src/error_codes/E0716.md
index c3546cd744f7b..b50c8b8e7ca23 100644
--- a/compiler/rustc_error_codes/src/error_codes/E0716.md
+++ b/compiler/rustc_error_codes/src/error_codes/E0716.md
@@ -30,8 +30,9 @@ let q = p;
 
 Whenever a temporary is created, it is automatically dropped (freed) according
 to fixed rules. Ordinarily, the temporary is dropped at the end of the enclosing
-statement -- in this case, after the `let`. This is illustrated in the example
-above by showing that `tmp` would be freed as we exit the block.
+statement -- in this case, after the outer `let` that assigns to `p`. This is
+illustrated in the example above by showing that `tmp` would be freed as we exit
+the block.
 
 To fix this problem, you need to create a local variable to store the value in
 rather than relying on a temporary. For example, you might change the original

From 50ff36239a424c855a5faeac45ac269e1c3f54d8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: carschandler <92899389+carschandler@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 1 Mar 2024 17:31:02 -0600
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Update E0716.md

Clearer wording
---
 compiler/rustc_error_codes/src/error_codes/E0716.md | 5 ++---
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/compiler/rustc_error_codes/src/error_codes/E0716.md b/compiler/rustc_error_codes/src/error_codes/E0716.md
index b50c8b8e7ca23..be60716a26426 100644
--- a/compiler/rustc_error_codes/src/error_codes/E0716.md
+++ b/compiler/rustc_error_codes/src/error_codes/E0716.md
@@ -30,9 +30,8 @@ let q = p;
 
 Whenever a temporary is created, it is automatically dropped (freed) according
 to fixed rules. Ordinarily, the temporary is dropped at the end of the enclosing
-statement -- in this case, after the outer `let` that assigns to `p`. This is
-illustrated in the example above by showing that `tmp` would be freed as we exit
-the block.
+statement -- in this case, after the `let p`. This is illustrated in the example
+above by showing that `tmp` would be freed as we exit the block.
 
 To fix this problem, you need to create a local variable to store the value in
 rather than relying on a temporary. For example, you might change the original