Rephrase per SME feedback

Author: kbatuigas

modules/get-started/pages/cluster-types/byoc/gcp/enable-secrets-byovpc-gcp.adoc

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 BYOVPC is an add-on feature that may require an additional purchase. To unlock this feature for your account, contact your Redpanda account team or https://www.redpanda.com/price-estimator[Redpanda Sales^].
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-Storing secrets in your cluster allows you to keep your cloud infrastructure secure as you integrate your data across different systems, for example, REST catalogs with your Iceberg-enabled topics. To enable secrets management on an existing BYOVPC cluster, you must update your cluster configuration. You can also create xref:get-started:cluster-types/byoc/gcp/vpc-byo-gcp.adoc[a new BYOVPC cluster] with secrets management already enabled.
+Storing secrets in your cluster allows you to keep your cloud infrastructure secure as you integrate your data across different systems, for example, REST catalogs with your Iceberg-enabled topics. If you do not have secrets management enabled on an existing BYOVPC cluster, you can do so by following the steps on this page to update your cluster configuration. You can also create xref:get-started:cluster-types/byoc/gcp/vpc-byo-gcp.adoc[a new BYOVPC cluster] with secrets management already enabled.
 
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@@ -108,6 +108,7 @@ curl -v -X PATCH \
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+[[check-secrets-cloud-ui]]
 . Check secrets management is available in the Cloud UI. 
 .. Log in to https://cloud.redpanda.com[Redpanda Cloud^].
 .. Go to the **Secrets Store** page of your cluster. You should be able to create a new secret.