From 366b3c9973bb87b3e7e23066b03f9837621bee2b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mark Hoeber <hoeber@edx.org>
Date: Fri, 21 Nov 2014 14:51:59 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] UI string review for google docs and calendar

DOC-1294
---
 google_drive/google_calendar.py                       | 6 +++---
 google_drive/google_docs.py                           | 2 +-
 google_drive/templates/html/google_calendar_edit.html | 4 ++--
 google_drive/templates/html/google_docs_edit.html     | 2 +-
 4 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/google_drive/google_calendar.py b/google_drive/google_calendar.py
index ea84b99..4e029ca 100644
--- a/google_drive/google_calendar.py
+++ b/google_drive/google_calendar.py
@@ -35,12 +35,12 @@ class GoogleCalendarBlock(XBlock):
         display_name="Display Name",
         help="This name appears in the horizontal navigation at the top of the page.",
         scope=Scope.settings,
-        default="Example Google Calendar"
+        default="Google Calendar"
     )
 
     calendar_id = String(
         display_name="Public Calendar ID",
-        help="This is the Calendar ID for the publically available Google calendar you would like to embed. To find this ID, go to your Calendar Settings and copy the ID found in the Calendar Address section.",
+        help="Google provides an ID for publicly available calendars. In the Google Calendar, open Settings and copy the ID from the Calendar Address section into this field.",
         scope=Scope.settings,
         default="edx.org_vme83q0j2v52mbhjncvfd5uqs8@group.calendar.google.com"
     )
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ class GoogleCalendarBlock(XBlock):
     # 0=Week, 1=Month, 2=Agenda
     default_view = Integer(
         display_name="Default View",
-        help="The view of the calendar initially presented to students.",
+        help="The calendar view that students see by default. A student can change this view.",
         scope=Scope.settings,
         default=1
     )
diff --git a/google_drive/google_docs.py b/google_drive/google_docs.py
index 7f28919..ad77130 100644
--- a/google_drive/google_docs.py
+++ b/google_drive/google_docs.py
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ class GoogleDocumentBlock(XBlock):
 
     embed_code = String(
         display_name="Embed Code",
-        help="Google provides an embed code for Drive documents with a variety of settings. From inside a Google Drive document, select Publish to the Web from within the File menu to get to your Embed Code with your desired settings.",
+        help="Google provides an embed code for Drive documents. In the Google Drive document, from the File menu, select Publish to the Web. Modify settings as needed, click Publish, and copy the embed code into this field.",
         scope=Scope.settings,
         default=textwrap.dedent("""
             <iframe
diff --git a/google_drive/templates/html/google_calendar_edit.html b/google_drive/templates/html/google_calendar_edit.html
index b623762..468320e 100644
--- a/google_drive/templates/html/google_calendar_edit.html
+++ b/google_drive/templates/html/google_calendar_edit.html
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
               {{ self.calendar_id }}
             </textarea>
           </div>
-          <span class="tip setting-help">{% trans "This is the Calendar ID for the publically available Google calendar you would like to embed. To find this ID, go to your Calendar Settings and copy the ID found in the Calendar Address section. You can also " %}
+          <span class="tip setting-help">{% trans "Google provides an ID for publicly available calendars. In the Google Calendar, open Settings and copy the ID from the Calendar Address section into this field. You can " %}
             <a href="https://support.google.com/calendar/answer/34578?ctx=tltp" target="_blank">learn more here</a>.
           </span>
       </li>
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
               {% endfor %}
             </select>
           </div>
-          <span class="tip setting-help">{% trans "The view of the calendar initially presented to students." %}</span>
+          <span class="tip setting-help">{% trans "The calendar view that students see by default. A student can change this view." %}</span>
       </li>
       <li class="field comp-setting-entry is-set"></li>
   </ul>
diff --git a/google_drive/templates/html/google_docs_edit.html b/google_drive/templates/html/google_docs_edit.html
index 65e0d1a..ca2ce54 100644
--- a/google_drive/templates/html/google_docs_edit.html
+++ b/google_drive/templates/html/google_docs_edit.html
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
               {{ self.embed_code }}
             </textarea>
           </div>
-          <span class="tip setting-help">{% trans "Google provides an embed code for Drive documents with a variety of settings. From inside a Google Drive document, select Publish to the Web from within the File menu to get to your Embed Code with your desired settings." %}</span>
+          <span class="tip setting-help">{% trans "Google provides an embed code for Drive documents. In the Google Drive document, from the File menu, select Publish to the Web. Modify settings as needed, click Publish, and copy the embed code into this field." %}</span>
       </li>
       <li class="field comp-setting-entry is-set"></li>
   </ul>