resolve review comments

Author: dinesh-newrelic

src/content/docs/infrastructure/host-integrations/host-integrations-list/github-integration.mdx

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-Implementing a New Relic Service Catalog can unlock considerable benefits, but at present, it requires a considerable investment of time and resources. You have to take care of team orchestration, user provisioning, role assignments, and entity ownership delineation, which create a significant threshold for entry. To ease this challenge, we suggest the adoption of an automation solution that capitalizes on existing team configurations and relationships maintained in external systems such as GitHub. This simplifies the initial configuration, dramatically lessen the required effort, and accelerates the adoption of the New Relic Service Catalog, making its powerful insights and organization tools more accessible to users.
+Implementing a New Relic Service Catalog can unlock considerable benefits, but it requires considerable time and resources. You have to take care of team orchestration, user provisioning, role assignments, and entity ownership delineation. These create a significant threshold for entry. To ease this challenge, consider an automation solution that capitalizes on existing team configurations and relationships maintained in external systems such as GitHub. This simplifies the initial configuration and accelerates the adoption of the New Relic Service Catalog.
 
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   title="GitHub Integration dashboard"
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 ## Service Catalog Details [#service-catalog-details]
 
-In this installation step, we will be asked to enable/disable the Power Service catalog option. Power Service catalog provides the users the ability to import all the data related to Teams, Repositories, Pull Request, Pull Request Review and Deployment. 
+In this step, you have to enable or disable the Power Service catalog option. This option provides users the ability to import all data related to teams, repositories, pull requests, pull request reviews, and deployments.
 
 Users can enable it for importing all the items mentioned in the Power Service Catalog. Disabling it, users will only be able to import basic information about the teams and repositories.
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-As a next step of installation, we need to click on the install button. Then we get redirected to the GitHub App installation page. This app is provided by New Relic to help fetch the user's GitHub account related information. 
+Next, click Install. The GitHub App installation page loads. New Relic provides this app to fetch the GitHub account information of a user.
 
 Once the installation is complete, we will see the result page which will dynamically list down the retrieved GitHub data related to teams, repos, pull requests and deployments. It will take some time to fetch the complete inforamtion, hence the page will keep refreshing after every 10 seconds till we've the power service catalog ready.