minor-grammatical-updates

Author: WriteMayur

src/content/docs/release-notes/agent-release-notes/ruby-release-notes/ruby-agent-9-16-0.mdx

@@ -16,11 +16,11 @@ security: []
 
 ## v9.16.0
 
-Version 9.16.0 introduces instrumentation for the aws-sdk-lambda gem, allows users to opt-in to adding labels to logs, updates View Component instrumentation, and fixes a bug with explain plans on Rails 7.2+.
+Version 9.16.0 introduces the following features and bug fixes:
 
 - **Feature: Instrumentation for aws-sdk-lambda**
 
-  If the aws-sdk-lambda gem is present and used to invoke remote AWS Lambda functions, timing and error details for the invocations will be reported to New Relic. [PR#2926](https://github.com/newrelic/newrelic-ruby-agent/pull/2926).
+  When the aws-sdk-lambda gem is available and used to invoke remote AWS Lambda functions, the timing and error details of the invocations will be reported to New Relic. [PR#2926](https://github.com/newrelic/newrelic-ruby-agent/pull/2926).
 
 - **Feature: Add new configuration options to attach custom tags (labels) to logs**