From faeb8733024d0c30b92b0e425c6ef8de1082dd80 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tobias Mueller <muelli@cryptobitch.de>
Date: Wed, 23 Jul 2014 16:03:30 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] GAR2014: Incorporated suggestions by Michael Hill

---
 annual-report-2014/GAR2013.sla | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/annual-report-2014/GAR2013.sla b/annual-report-2014/GAR2013.sla
index 7ce07de..fb4f473 100644
--- a/annual-report-2014/GAR2013.sla
+++ b/annual-report-2014/GAR2013.sla
@@ -381,11 +381,11 @@
             <para PARENT="GNOME Bread"/>
             <ITEXT CH="Marketing - New York, USA"/>
             <para PARENT="GNOME Header 4"/>
-            <ITEXT CH="The GNOME Marketing Team (now rebranded as the GNOME Engagement Team) used this hackfest to build a foundation for the team.  The beginning of the hackfest focused on  fundamental questions such as: What is GNOME? Why does GNOME matter?  The later part of the hackfest, foused on the visual identity and brand presentation for GNOME."/>
+            <ITEXT CH="The GNOME Marketing Team (now rebranded as the GNOME Engagement Team) used this hackfest to build a foundation for the team.  The beginning of the hackfest focused on  fundamental questions such as: What is GNOME? Why does GNOME matter?  The later part of the hackfest focused on the visual identity and brand presentation for GNOME."/>
             <para PARENT="GNOME Bread"/>
             <ITEXT CH="Open Help Docs - Cincinnati, OH, USA"/>
             <para PARENT="GNOME Header 4"/>
-            <ITEXT CH="Following the 2013 OpenHelp conference, members of the GNOME Documentation Team convened to brainstorm ideas on improving GNOME developer documentation. Among the things the team worked on during this hackfest are a revamp the GNOME Platform Overview as well as application development documentation in general. A guide for preparing applications for translation was also produced, in addition to Vala examples in the platform tutorials. Finally, the new HowDoI developer documentation initiative was started, which encourages GNOME developers to write specific tutorial-style guides for common tasks."/>
+            <ITEXT CH="Following the 2013 OpenHelp conference, members of the GNOME Documentation Team convened to brainstorm ideas on improving GNOME developer documentation. Among the things the team worked on during this hackfest were a revamp the GNOME Platform Overview as well as application development documentation in general. A guide for preparing applications for translation was also produced, in addition to Vala examples in the platform tutorials. Finally, the new HowDoI developer documentation initiative was started, which encourages GNOME developers to write specific tutorial-style guides for common tasks."/>
             <para PARENT="GNOME Bread"/>
             <ITEXT CH=".NET + GNOME - Vienna, Austria"/>
             <para PARENT="GNOME Header 4"/>
@@ -397,11 +397,11 @@
             <para PARENT="GNOME Bread"/>
             <ITEXT CH="GNOME Summit - Montréal, Canada"/>
             <para PARENT="GNOME Header 4"/>
-            <ITEXT CH="The annual GNOME Summit typically takes place in Boston. However, in 2013 it changed location to Montréal, Canada. Despite the change of location, the outcome was very productive. The new GNotification API was completed and there was some brainstorming on design as well as functionality of GNOME Boxes. Lastly, a handful of accessibility regressions were fixed and plans were made to ensure proper accessibility support in GNOME under Wayland."/>
+            <ITEXT CH="The annual GNOME Summit typically takes place in Boston. However, in 2013 it changed location to Montréal, Canada. Despite the change of location, the outcome was very productive. The new GNotification API was completed and there was some brainstorming on design as well as functionality of GNOME Boxes. Lastly, a handful of accessibility regressions were fixed, and plans were made to ensure proper accessibility support in GNOME under Wayland."/>
             <para PARENT="GNOME Bread"/>
             <ITEXT CH="WebKitGTK+ - A Coruña, Galicia, Spain"/>
             <para PARENT="GNOME Header 4"/>
-            <ITEXT CH="With 30 people in attendance, the fifth year of the WebKitGTK+ hackfest was the largest to date. A variety of areas was worked on during this event, including Wayland support for WebKit2 and WebKitGTK+, design and functional improvements to GNOME Web, porting the build system to CMake, as well as  improving the integration of the new Web Inspector with WebKitGTK+."/>
+            <ITEXT CH="With 30 people in attendance, the fifth year of the WebKitGTK+ hackfest was the largest to date. A variety of areas was worked on during this event, including Wayland support for WebKit2 and WebKitGTK+, design and functional improvements to GNOME Web, porting the build system to CMake, and improving the integration of the new Web Inspector with WebKitGTK+."/>
             <trail PARENT="GNOME Bread"/>
             <PageItemAttributes/>
         </PAGEOBJECT>
@@ -481,7 +481,7 @@
             <para PARENT="GNOME Bread"/>
             <ITEXT CH="Día GNOME"/>
             <para PARENT="GNOME Header 4"/>
-            <ITEXT CH="Día GNOME (GNOME Day) 2013 was held in Temuco, Chile on November 9.The main topics included GNOME 3.10, Ubuntu GNOME, how to write good bug reports, and how to write apps with PyGobject. Other activities also took place including “Olimpiadas GNOME” (GNOME Olympics), a fun sport event, and “Guess the Movie”, an entertaining trivia event where the winners received GNOME t-shirts and stickers. Around 50 people participated in the event. "/>
+            <ITEXT CH="Día GNOME (GNOME Day) 2013 was held in Temuco, Chile on November 9. The main topics included GNOME 3.10, Ubuntu GNOME, how to write good bug reports, and how to write apps with PyGobject. Other activities also took place including “Olimpiadas GNOME” (GNOME Olympics), a fun sport event, and “Guess the Movie”, an entertaining trivia event where the winners received GNOME t-shirts and stickers. Around 50 people participated in the event. "/>
             <trail PARENT="GNOME Bread"/>
             <PageItemAttributes/>
         </PAGEOBJECT>