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 # Underdocumented iOS Maneuvers
 
-Since the very moment the iPhone was first unveiled to the world, we have have been told over and over again how wonderfully intuitive and easy to use its operating system is/was. Ease of use was leaned heavily upon by Apple in iPhone OS' adolescence as justification for its omission of certain features (both actively and by chance) which
+Since the very moment the iPhone was first unveiled to the world, we have have been told over and over again how wonderfully intuitive and easy to use its operating system is/was. Ease of use was leaned heavily upon by Apple in iPhone OS' adolescence as justification for its omission of certain features (both actively and by chance) which its direct, Android-running rivals would then often make their next flagship int
 
 
 
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 In the past few weeks, I have come to realize that the device which I now hold in my hands - which I *cling to*, in fact, at all hours and completely without reason - is the absolute manifestation of everything my 14-year-old, first generation iPhone-adopting self could have possibly dreamt of in its future.
 
+![Original iPhone Activation](https://i.snap.as/nqhmSK4U.png)
+
 Unlike that iPhone 8 Plus review - which was a very sentimental reflection on "the last iPhone" designed in the configuration I had understood for a decade and therefore accompanied by a bunch of foolhardy lamentations *bitching* about the iPhone X - this review will be one of sincere wonderment regarding *the thing, itself.* Taken out of 2020 context and placed in my 14-year-old hand in 2009, this Pacific Blue iPhone 12 Pro Max would not have disappointed me in the slightest. By that, I mean... It is as unimaginably capable as I would have imagined. 
 
 ![The Original](https://i.snap.as/Ep06W6A9.jpg)