From 6451c3dd494da0081f8e1c8c9242ce8dc5a3aaa2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Ryan Kuo Date: Tue, 17 Sep 2024 11:28:33 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] address mgartner comments --- src/current/_includes/v23.1/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md | 4 ++-- src/current/_includes/v23.2/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md | 4 ++-- src/current/_includes/v24.1/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md | 4 ++-- src/current/_includes/v24.2/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md | 4 ++-- 4 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/current/_includes/v23.1/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md b/src/current/_includes/v23.1/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md index 2866529f0b3..4d7b601e33d 100644 --- a/src/current/_includes/v23.1/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md +++ b/src/current/_includes/v23.1/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md @@ -4,9 +4,9 @@ - Benefits of increasing normalization: - - Can improve performance for write-heavy workloads. This is because, with increased normalization, more data is written to one place rather than to multiple places. + - Can improve performance for write-heavy workloads. This is because, with increased normalization, a given business fact must be written to one place rather than to multiple places. - Allows separate transactions to modify related underlying data without causing [contention](#transaction-contention). - - Reduces the chance of data inconsistency, since more data is written only to one place. + - Reduces the chance of data inconsistency, since a given business fact must be written only to one place. - Reduces or eliminates data redundancy. - Uses less disk space. diff --git a/src/current/_includes/v23.2/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md b/src/current/_includes/v23.2/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md index 2866529f0b3..4d7b601e33d 100644 --- a/src/current/_includes/v23.2/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md +++ b/src/current/_includes/v23.2/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md @@ -4,9 +4,9 @@ - Benefits of increasing normalization: - - Can improve performance for write-heavy workloads. This is because, with increased normalization, more data is written to one place rather than to multiple places. + - Can improve performance for write-heavy workloads. This is because, with increased normalization, a given business fact must be written to one place rather than to multiple places. - Allows separate transactions to modify related underlying data without causing [contention](#transaction-contention). - - Reduces the chance of data inconsistency, since more data is written only to one place. + - Reduces the chance of data inconsistency, since a given business fact must be written only to one place. - Reduces or eliminates data redundancy. - Uses less disk space. diff --git a/src/current/_includes/v24.1/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md b/src/current/_includes/v24.1/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md index 2866529f0b3..4d7b601e33d 100644 --- a/src/current/_includes/v24.1/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md +++ b/src/current/_includes/v24.1/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md @@ -4,9 +4,9 @@ - Benefits of increasing normalization: - - Can improve performance for write-heavy workloads. This is because, with increased normalization, more data is written to one place rather than to multiple places. + - Can improve performance for write-heavy workloads. This is because, with increased normalization, a given business fact must be written to one place rather than to multiple places. - Allows separate transactions to modify related underlying data without causing [contention](#transaction-contention). - - Reduces the chance of data inconsistency, since more data is written only to one place. + - Reduces the chance of data inconsistency, since a given business fact must be written only to one place. - Reduces or eliminates data redundancy. - Uses less disk space. diff --git a/src/current/_includes/v24.2/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md b/src/current/_includes/v24.2/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md index 2866529f0b3..4d7b601e33d 100644 --- a/src/current/_includes/v24.2/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md +++ b/src/current/_includes/v24.2/performance/reduce-hot-spots.md @@ -4,9 +4,9 @@ - Benefits of increasing normalization: - - Can improve performance for write-heavy workloads. This is because, with increased normalization, more data is written to one place rather than to multiple places. + - Can improve performance for write-heavy workloads. This is because, with increased normalization, a given business fact must be written to one place rather than to multiple places. - Allows separate transactions to modify related underlying data without causing [contention](#transaction-contention). - - Reduces the chance of data inconsistency, since more data is written only to one place. + - Reduces the chance of data inconsistency, since a given business fact must be written only to one place. - Reduces or eliminates data redundancy. - Uses less disk space.