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From: Professor Graham Leach <78756076+ProfessorGram@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 27 Dec 2024 11:43:41 +0800
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 # What is Backdrop?
 
-_**TL;DR:  Backdrop is an exciting and promising way forward for organizations seeking a means of leaving legacy Drupal behind in a way that preserves Drupal-related investments of time, energy, people and money as much as possible.**_
+_**TL;DR:  Backdrop is an exciting and promising way forward for organizations seeking a means of leaving legacy Drupal behind in a way that preserves their Drupal-related investments in terms of time, energy, people and money.**_
 
 Backdrop is a web application development framework most commonly configured as a Content Management System (CMS) for use by: