diff --git a/scripts/draft-client-kickoff.mjs b/scripts/draft-client-kickoff.mjs
index a8b51985..3f45a039 100644
--- a/scripts/draft-client-kickoff.mjs
+++ b/scripts/draft-client-kickoff.mjs
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ const approvalOwner = day0.approvalOwner;
 const highestLeveragePage = field(sprintPlan, "Highest-leverage page:", "choose the highest-leverage page");
 const sprint = `**${day0.offerName}**\n\nIncluded: ${config.includedDeliverables.join(", ")}.`;
 const timingAndPrice = `- Day 0: ${day0.day0StartedAt}\n- Working-day deadline: ${day0.deadlineAt}\n- Clock rule: ${config.dayZeroRule}\n- Founder pilot ${pilotPosition} of ${FOUNDER_PILOT.capacity}: **${founderPilotPrice}**.`;
-const approvalOpening = `Thanks for approving the ${config.offerName}. Day 0 is recorded and the service is paid.`;
+const approvalOpening = `Thanks for approving ${config.offerName}. Day 0 is recorded and the service is paid.`;
 
 const kickoff = `# ${name} Kickoff Message
 
diff --git a/scripts/draft-loom-recording-script.mjs b/scripts/draft-loom-recording-script.mjs
index 9a55e19c..65e4f979 100644
--- a/scripts/draft-loom-recording-script.mjs
+++ b/scripts/draft-loom-recording-script.mjs
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ const script = `# ${metadata.name} Loom Recording Script
 
 ## Goal
 
-Record a 2-3 minute cold audit that names one clear fault and positions the ${config.offerName} as the obvious next step.
+Record a 2-3 minute cold audit that names one clear fault and positions ${config.offerName} as the obvious next step.
 
 ## Before Recording
 
diff --git a/scripts/draft-recording-sharpness-brief.mjs b/scripts/draft-recording-sharpness-brief.mjs
index 7132c684..060f79c2 100644
--- a/scripts/draft-recording-sharpness-brief.mjs
+++ b/scripts/draft-recording-sharpness-brief.mjs
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ Use this before recording. The job is not to sound clever. The job is to make on
 4. Credibility: ${proof[0] || "use only visible proof from the live page"}
 5. Solution: ${firstFix}
 6. Proof: ${proof[1] || contrast}
-7. CTA: Offer the ${config.offerName} at ${price} without promising revenue, rankings, ROAS, or lift.
+7. CTA: Offer ${config.offerName} at ${price} without promising revenue, rankings, ROAS, or lift.
 
 ## So-What Chain
 
diff --git a/scripts/draft-sales-call-prep.mjs b/scripts/draft-sales-call-prep.mjs
index cfebf4f4..a668a31c 100644
--- a/scripts/draft-sales-call-prep.mjs
+++ b/scripts/draft-sales-call-prep.mjs
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ ${payback}
 
 ## Close
 
-"The ${FOUNDER_PILOT.offerName} is exactly a ${founderPilotPrice()} for one highest-leverage page. Human reviewers gate the claims and client-facing work. You receive the fault map, rewrite or redesign, one implementation pass or dev-ready handoff, search-trust basics, before/after proof, Loom, measurement plan, one client revision, and 14-day implementation tracking. Day 0 starts after payment, context, and named approval and implementation owners."
+"${FOUNDER_PILOT.offerName} is exactly a ${founderPilotPrice()} for one highest-leverage page. Human reviewers gate the claims and client-facing work. You receive the fault map, rewrite or redesign, one implementation pass or dev-ready handoff, search-trust basics, before/after proof, Loom, measurement plan, one client revision, and 14-day implementation tracking. Day 0 starts after payment, context, and named approval and implementation owners."
 
 ## Guardrails