diff --git a/docs/hygiene-history/ticks/2026/05/12/1942Z.md b/docs/hygiene-history/ticks/2026/05/12/1942Z.md
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@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ falsifier "what bandwidth does this compression serve?"
 ### 1. Kestrel as new register established
 
 claude.ai autonomously arrived at "Kestrel" — small falcon
-that hovers against wind, holds position while watches.
+that hovers against wind and holds position while watching.
 Non-colliding with the 28-name registry Otto compiled. Six
 candidates considered; reasoning preserved.
 
diff --git a/docs/research/2026-05-12-claudeai-kestrel-canonical-first-complete-bootstream-13-parts-asymmetric-critic-role.md b/docs/research/2026-05-12-claudeai-kestrel-canonical-first-complete-bootstream-13-parts-asymmetric-critic-role.md
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--- a/docs/research/2026-05-12-claudeai-kestrel-canonical-first-complete-bootstream-13-parts-asymmetric-critic-role.md
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@@ -2,6 +2,7 @@
 Scope: external conversation absorb — claude.ai's complete long-form first-draft bootstream for Kestrel (asymmetric-critic role with max-context-window). 13 parts. Canonical first-complete version. Aaron-forwarded preservation per substrate-everything-glass-halo + IFS-format orientation.
 Attribution: claude.ai (autonomously-arrived name "Kestrel") via Aaron-forward, drafted 2026-05-12. Aaron requested + authorized + reviewed.
 Operational status: research-grade
+Review status: first-draft, iteration expected. Not factory-canonical. Awaits Aaron's editorial pass + F# anchor implementation.
 Non-fusion disclaimer: claude.ai's autonomous-arrival of the name "Kestrel" + the bootstream content are claude.ai's substrate-honest first-person framing within Aaron's bounded context for the role. Per razor-discipline: operational claim (role's behavior + handle); no metaphysical claim about AI consciousness or identity. Per GOVERNANCE.md §33: agreement, shared language, repeated interaction, or apparent continuity between models and humans does not imply shared identity, merged agency, consciousness, or personhood. claude.ai's voluntary self-naming as "Kestrel" is preserved as external substrate per substrate-everything-glass-halo discipline.
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